We weren't able to get the mikes yet but we did get the lights lets us know what else we can fix.

 

It was very good, I give it a nine for the footage, but the ending text ruined it to a five or six, don't do that again. If your going to disrespect Transformers, your on the wrong website. And you wonder why you have about five people. Do it again and you will only have four.

Lighting was much better, and the sound was a bit better too. I'd guess by being closer to the camera. Still, try to edit out the beginning and ending where we see you turning on the camera. Unless you just want it there.

It would be a fun little show to watch if you guys were not so rushed. It gives a very nervous feel and you keep stumbling over what you seem to wanna say.

 

Maybe try cue cards. Write down everything you want to cover in what order so you can be more relaxed and just work through the show.

 

I'm not saying I'd do any better. I'd be just as excited/nervous doing that for fun, and just may take doing it enough times to loose that feel :tfgrin

 

Keep the comedy and add more toys !!!

 

And GO TWINS :yay

The more you guys work at it, the more you'll get your timing down. Maybe look into edititng out any blank time in the video, that way you can take your time filming.

It was very good, I give it a nine for the footage, but the ending text ruined it to a five or six, don't do that again. If your going to disrespect Transfomers, your on the wrong website. And you wonder why you have about five people. Do it again and you will only have four.

Well thanks for the critique. As for disrespecting transformers its not really meant that way. Its supposed to be funny. I have been collecting Transformers since 1984 and I can tell you I have respect for the line. Its just us poking fun in the toyline we love. Just like the whole watchers thing we actually have more then 3 watchers.

It was very good, I give it a nine for the footage, but the ending text ruined it to a five or six, don't do that again. If your going to disrespect Transfomers,[sic] your on the wrong website. And you wonder why you have about five people. Do it again and you will only have four.

 

We appreciate helpful critique, however, playing internet tough guy because we disagree with your opinion isn't all that helpful. Incidentally, if you're going to be so defensive of Transformers, it seems the least you could do would be to spell check your post and make sure you spelled "Transformers" correctly. :doh

 

Thanks to the rest of you for your helpful input. And yes, we've been toying with the idea of writing up a loose script. The trouble is none of our stuff works well when rehearsed.

It would be a fun little show to watch if you guys were not so rushed. It gives a very nervous feel and you keep stumbling over what you seem to wanna say.

 

Maybe try cue cards. Write down everything you want to cover in what order so you can be more relaxed and just work through the show.

 

I'm not saying I'd do any better. I'd be just as excited/nervous doing that for fun, and just may take doing it enough times to loose that feel :tfgrin

 

Keep the comedy and add more toys !!!

 

And GO TWINS :yay

We actually used cue time cards this time which did makes us feel rushed and worried we were going to go over the 10 min you tube time. Hopefully we will get better at it. I will definitely try out that topics cards cause man I tell you when you are in front of that camera you start to forget stuff. Thanks for the help we will definitely add that to the show. We plan to add more toys and toy lines as we go. Anything else other then toys you would like to see?

And GO TWINS :yay

 

Yeah, I was working at their home field for a total of 12 seasons! :P

The more you guys work at it, the more you'll get your timing down. Maybe look into edititng out any blank time in the video, that way you can take your time filming.

I will look into that. I'm using Nero Movie creator to make these and I really need to figure out how to cut scenes out so It will give me something new to try this weekend.