:eek :eek :eek :eek

A sweet work!!! :thumb

You had me right up until the Superion pix :tflaugh1

 

The individual bot's are awesome tho, so good work there :thumb

Great work! :thumb What book is that in the background of your first picture? :tfhuh

 

 

CJ

 

 

 

:cjdance

scratched the first attempt, what do you think about the second?

 

 

 

 

Great work! :thumb What book is that in the background of your first picture? :tfhuh

 

 

CJ

 

 

 

:cjdance

Transformers Ultamate guide pg 55

scratched the first attempt, what do you think about the second?

 

 

 

 

I say it's better. :clap

looks good... my only concern is it's more parts former than transformer

but than again. it's better than i could do...

looks good... my only concern is it's more parts former than transformer

but than again. it's better than i could do...

 

Yes much more parts former than I usually like. It looks good but I would have tried to build the arms out of the arm bots using the hip twist to provide the proper arm movement, and there should at least be some of the corebot showing. The work you did on the paint jobs of the individual bots are fantastic, however their combination still doesn't quite work. It is possible to pull it off with out too much parts forming I mean look at the Predaking I'm working on good pose ability, and he uses all of the parts in all modes aside from his head and maybe his feet though I am working on a use for the feet, and maybe a hide away head for him.

 

 

also the E Superion can be reworked to be a fantastic remake of his G1 self.

 

 

so can the E Bruticus

 

 

You see some times you need to take the chance at hurting how the original figure looked in order to get things just right. Just like you did with Armada Cyclonus he turned out fantastic by the way.

 

I'm sorry if this seems too critical how ever I know that if you really try you can figure out a way to make them work with out making his legs bricks, after all you made that fantastic Devastator , and from what I could tell even though you didn't show it off in your pics he probably had some pose ability in his legs. However if you like it then great but we both know that you can make him so much better.

The second attempt at gestalt mode SUCKS!

The second attempt at gestalt mode SUCKS!

 

Wow I thought I was a tough critic. I wouldn't say it sucks but it could use some rethinking using the core bot more in the gestalt mode.