Umm, I want to get some opinions. Been frequenting this board the spark is being rebuilt...I guess.. anyways, here's the first little bit on a story I started to write last week, thus far i'm up to 3 pages and I want people to read this part and tell me what they think.

 

We may not be robots anymore, but we will always fight!

Smokescreen sighed as he realized exactly what was going on.

 

TRANSFORMERS: ALTERNATORS

Power Reborn

 

The Earth has been under attack for about a year now. The Decepticons gained "one up" on the defense when they unleashed the Cosmic Rust onto the Autobots Hound, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe, Jazz, Smokescreen and Silver Streak. Every Autobot stationed on Earth has been affected by it. Most others have returned to Cybertron for new body construction. However these 6 warriors have remained behind to try to fend off the Decepticons in any way possible.

 

However, no one was aware that a secret project has been underway since the war began. Dubbed Project: Alternator, the government hopes to use terrestrial cars to help fight the war. There has always been one problem, the spark of a warrior is not something you make.

 

The members of Project: Alternator, a group of ten vehicles thus far, includes two versions of the Subaru Impreza, WRC and WRX, The Dodge Viper SRT-10 and GTS, Dodge Neon SRT-4, Jeep Wrangler, Dodge Ram 1500, Chevrolet Corvette, Mazda 6, and Mazda RX-8.

 

Contact Cybertron. We need to speak to someone over there!

 

A soldier flipped a few switches, typed a few lines into his console.

A picture appeared on the screen in front of them of a large white robot, this was Ultra Magnus one of the Autobot Commanders.

good job so far! keep it up!