so after being swamped with coursework the last couple of weeks i decided to spend a night or two colouring, just to keep at i yah know sooooooo i found some cool line art and went for it :D been trying to work on my rendering etc :)

crit welcome as allways

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32225589/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32226404/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32226591/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32225984/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32226118/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32225088/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32225424/

Ghost Rider line art by trent and miki

Moon Knight Line art by David Finch

Deadpools supporting cast line art by Dammon Denton ( i think)

Unicron line art by Joe Ng

I like the 3rd verison of Ghost Rider. Very Awesome. The Unicron is ok, maybe blur his farther away hand, to give the overall picture more dimention. The only thing I don't like is Thundercracker. His pose and his reaction. Like Cybertron wouldn't know his coming? I think you or the line artist should think about taking him out.

 

The whole planet design, Cybetron I'm guessing. Kind of looks like pile of dirt. There needs to be taller buildings, err the landscape looks to not at all there in deffinition. Attention to detail is were its at in this case. I think that would help. different colors echoing from down below the cities creaveses would be cool.

 

Unicrons eyes should create a glow reflection on the planet, like the sun to the ocean, that would be cool as well. :thumb

the unicrons still a wip at the moment

That unicron pic is amazing. are u going to color in those ships?

yeah, all that needs to be done really is finish redering unicron and cybertron do the ships and then slap some glows and maybe a lil motion blur on his arm to indicate the movement

The Unicron Pic Looks Great! :thumb

 

 

CJ

 

 

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