To work a little on human figures, I've made this digital-drawing of Marissa Fairborne

I started with a pic of a real girl as a base

looks nice... only complaint is her lips look a little odd...

I agree about the lips.  And we'll need to see the picture of the real girl for proper reference.

I agree about the lips.  And we'll need to see the picture of the real girl for proper reference.

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your avatar... its so ..... :tflaugh1  :tflaugh1  :tflaugh1

her face makes her look puppetish....I cant believe this would be my 500th post...

I really like the shadowing you've done on her body, but the heavy line down the middle kind of creeps me out a little.  I realize it's probably a zipper, but on something so form-fitting and of what looks to be thin material, the emphasis of shadow on the line makes it look (to me) like an indentation that goes deeper than the suit, into her body. 

Aside from that, :thumb (even the lips.  Take into account the overall smoothness of the drawing and they match the feel pretty well)

:eek2 Wow, that's good work.

 

I agree with Cruel about the line though. The right boob looks kinda funky to me too.

I agree about the lips.  And we'll need to see the picture of the real girl for proper reference.

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Here's a link to it, it's from Seibertron's "Before Carly, there was..." (rated PG-13 by them, so beware  :tftongue )