i decided to try coloring another image. this is only the second thing i've colored so tips would be nice. ;)

Thats very nice!!

Wow...that's really good. NICE WORK!! :clap

Nice, but there are some issues. The light source isn't quite clear. The upper half reads as from top left (viewer), but the bottom half is scattered. There is no shadow on the white portions leaving those areas looking flat. I don't know what program you're using, but I'd be happy to give you some tips on those areas.

Feel free to PM me and I will do my best to give you some pointers.

 

Great work, just a few minor issues. :thumb

^i sorta agree their i think the light sorce is infront in the sky so thier should be a few more shadows under his cheast

Nice, but there are some issues. The light source isn't quite clear. The upper half reads as from top left (viewer), but the bottom half is scattered. There is no shadow on the white portions leaving those areas looking flat. I don't know what program you're using, but I'd be happy to give you some tips on those areas.

Feel free to PM me and I will do my best to give you some pointers.

 

Great work, just a few minor issues. :thumb

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thanks for the tips i'll work on it for next time :thumb

to point out the good your points the battle damige is very good and the texture is gr8

to point out the good your points the battle damige is very good and the texture is gr8

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yes, the battle damage does look great, for being your second time doing this, its awesome!

You stayed in the lines and that's heads and shoulders above me :P

 

But your choice of color for the thighs and arms is... an awkward choice? Definately, not a good color unless you're depicting him post-truck rally or post-sewage treatment plant explosion. The application is fantastic, but I keep getting this weird image in my brain when I look at it. :redface

And you could probably use another color to distinguish the joints from the arms proper. In between the fingers, for example.