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Prowler974a's movie concept Mirage


kareanne

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Well, here are my crits. The line quality is very nice and sharp where it needs to be, and round where it needs to be.

 

As for the pose, it's very off, not only does it lack personality and dynamicism, but it looks like he's about to fall flat on his face. He doesn't look alive, let alone capture the personality of any of the incarnations of mirage to date.

 

Furthermore, he doesn't look very flexible with such an elongated upper torso.

 

I like the concept of the exposed parts, but it seems overdone in many areas, and with too many pistons without more boxy machine parts

 

The coloring is ok, but it also lacks personality, I guess because the colors seem more dull than vibrant.

 

I hope that helps the two of you for your future work ^_^;

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