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This has also been posted on Transfantics. Depending on reviews, you guys might get the next chapter(s).

 

In the beginning, there was just Megatron. Then the conquest began with the cross-dimensional rift that brought the prince Vegeta. With the union of these two beings, the universe wept. Countless civilizations collapsed under the onslaught of Decepticons and Saiyan warriors and the trample of their feet. Even the Autbots greatest warriors were no match for combined might of these warriors. Even Optimus Prime was captured and tortured countless times. One warrior though, stood up to this menace, Driftimus Prime, and his allies, freed the surviving Autobots and conducted guerilla warfare from the depths of Cybertron. But MegatronVegeta discovered yet another dimensional rift and joined his might with that of the master vampire, Alucard, to become AlutronVegeta. Even with his enemies newfound power, Drifter and his allies still fought on. But even then, AlutronVegeta conquered more and more. Even Unicron fell before his might. But even with all his power, AlutronVegeta suffered great damage from the battle and lies in stasis. Or does he?

 

 

In the Kaon throneroom, a CR chamber was repairing the damgaes that AlutronVegeta incurred during his battle with Unicron. Soundwave watched over him night and day, constantly vigilant to any that may seek to slay his master during his slumber. A shadow standing in the doorway caught his eye. The Decepticon Starscream emerged from the shadows. "Soundwave, how goes our master's repairs?" Soundwave's melodic voice responded, "His repairs are at an accelerated rate due to his merged natures, Starscream. Soon our master will rise to lead us to total victory."

A terrifying scream and a scrapping of metal on metal made their heads spin round towards the CR chamber. "I WON'T LET YOU REVIVE! THIS IS OUR BEST CHANCE TO WIN AGAINST YOU!" screamed a diminuitive yellow Transformer. Neither Decepticon moved in that direction, but merely laughed at the Autobot, especially since it was Bumblebee. Bumblebee was never of any threat to any Decepticon, save the cassettes. As Bumblebee drew his weapon to fire on the CR chamber, laughter and a hand emerged from the CR chamber's viewing window. The hand engulfed Bumblebee's head, and slowly but firmly grasped it. "You have survived all these years, Bumblebee. I find it rather amusing that you would try to interrupt my slumber. Even more so that you are still alive." The hand began to squeeze tightly on the miniscule Transfortmer's head. "Well, you WERE alive." Circuitry and mech fluid spranjg towards the ceiling as Bumblebee's head exploded under the squeezing pressure of the hand. As the pulpy mess collapsed to the floor, the door to the CR chamber flew across the room and landed with a THUD! next to Soundwave and Starscream. A dust rose up as it landed, filling the room. A stompng and blazing red optics marched towards them. They trembled and fell to their knees and proclaimed, "MASTER!" as it stopped short of them.

"Arise my minions, there is work to be done. Prepare the dimensional gateway!"

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You can post more if you'd like... not nice to threaten not posting. Its easy to copypasta on multiple forums you know.

 

The story has some promise but there are some great errors in even this sample. You will get better as time goes on, so please, post some more.

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You can post more if you'd like... not nice to threaten not posting. Its easy to copypasta on multiple forums you know.

 

The story has some promise but there are some great errors in even this sample. You will get better as time goes on, so please, post some more.

Yeah I noticed quite a few spelling errors plus it needs some tweaking. Havent done a fanfic in over a year or so. Used to dominate this place with them several years ago. Had some good stuff too, like the battle of the megatrons, lol.

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