uhhh yeah i guess im oing to do a fanfic (first one so dont be all "YOU SUCK!" even if i might) but still meh i guess im going to start with a trailer and ill try not to spell very badly like i normally do






the scene starts with a peterbuilt truck running around the city at night. After three seconds of this optimus speaks "Though we, the autobots might have faced some terrible losses, our comrades, and the near doom of megatron; i fear we might have to endure a new type of enemy...
Now the truck goes to a dark alley and transforms; however in mid transformation his chest glows a dark purple and when he transforms completly, (his head is like primes exceptwith two horns (right behind were he would have ear.)) The camera turns around showing three robots ( rachet, BB, Jazz and armorhide(not ironhide...armorhide ))
then the scene changes with the the name of the movie, TRANSFORMES 2 NEMESIS with optimus finally ending his speech: Nemesis!


( if you didnt find out already it was nemesis prime dumdums not optimus..)


well it isnt that bad is it

omg that is one of the best plots for a fanfic ive heard so far kudos man

yeah i finally started this well unless you consider the first post the start which then means that im finally doing this again but.... ill be quiet now.






A purple car is speeding with the police right behind it closing in to the right, the front window goes down. Suddenly a hardcore goth/emo`s head shows shooting with a machine gun. he blurts out " you're end is near!" while laughing. now the scene changes to a huge bank and 2 men going inside they suddenly shoot the guards and one of them shouts" everybody down now! facing his partner he tells him " you stay here im going in..." The scene changes and goes back to the emo kid and his purple car . A traffic light swiches to red ahead of him and quickly dogdes the the cars on the side but one car in front of him suddenly stops and smashes with him sending the car flying the car still facing up is now in front of the car which he collided however the emo kid is deadand the car still running the car which collided now showing its a police car transforms replying " it looks like your dead end is now ( here we start with the sucky puns ).




i think that devestator should not be the bot with most attention which combines

meh ill probably update this weekend no promises tho

hey i didnt promise you it was going to be in the weekend



Dead end now actually in a dead end, ( oh the ironic puns :argg) says "you know why were better than you? its because we- Prowl interrupts" we?"back to the bank robbery the criminal see's an old man staring at him the criminal says "what are you lookin at huh?" now suddenly a small explosion just showing were the stairs are is covered with fire. the man on the floor who was staring says" guess your friend isn't very good with bombs is he?" the criminal replies " oh no... he's perfect". scene outside the bank, it explodes.
the cameras now move to two cars in the parking lot ( breakdown, and wildrider ). Breakdown comments " hmmm not my style ya know? too many people." whatever dead end needs us." " the ice holes on it okay?" back to the scene with dead end and prowl ( im getting a bit dizzy with all the scene changes . now prowl standing " bah i dont need this trouble youre just trying to confuse me well suddenly we a front view of prowl but in the back round theres a big bulky ( not fat) robot which is about 3.5 heads bigger than prowl. the robot grabs him and throws him back to the road. prowl is now lying in the road from defeat ( but still conscious). motormaster is now in front of him and shouts" Show no mercy!"




im killing somebody already? stay tuned! (hehe i always wanted to say that )

okay... today i don't think i am actually going to edit the story.... im going to make character profiles! and if anyone thinks for some reason im not going to put nemesis's i will. its just the fact that motormaster is a black truck could have set someone off i guess


oh and im not putting any profiles of the first movie characters except sam witwicky & starscream



Motormaster

story:

Like his g1 toy personality he wants to destroy
optimus prime for fame and also to have the rank of
being called "lord motormaster" after finding out that
there was a bounty of optimus prime for the
responsibility of megatrons death. With the payment of
leadership of the decepticon army.

appearance:

Alt mode:

a small black truck the only twice the size of bumblebee only
with the nose of the truck being overstuffed with an oversized engine.
The nose however is so stuffed that bits of the engine are sticking out.
He however comes with a HUGE (you know its huge when huge has capitals.)
trailer which other than size looks perfectly normal.
his wheels are also big (not monster truck big)

robot mode:


with arms with the oversized engine and nose he IS powerful looking
and on the back of his arms are covered with engine bits
on his back it shows a back pack with a somehow semi transformed back of trailer.
Connected to the trailer below the where the arm pits would be are two huge guns with amo
thingys being the wheels. the legs are normal looking robot legs

i guess thats enough for now...(in other words i need to do homework

okay... im going back to the storie now... .


back to the motor,dead end, prowl scene. As Motormaster is going to crush prowl he suddenly gets tackled by Rachet, sending motormaster flying and ending with a crash to a building/ truck/ etc. ( it just needs EXPLOSIONS! ) Motormaster: "what the!?" Ironhide: its called saving your friends ass stupid."
The cameras now move to the other side where they show three other autobots, bumblebee, ironhide and rachet. Bumblebee: "or in other words its called kicking your butt!" Monstructor: "Bah i dont need this! now wheres optimus?"

The scene now changes to breakdown and wildrider, it starts with optimus pounding the ground to make a small earthquake causing breakdown and wildrider to spin out of control and crash into a building. Prime speaks " alright decepticon who are you and what are you doing here? dont you know your war is lost megatron died along with the allspark."