Quintesson #1
Apr 27 2008, 04:19 AM
=O
So after the whole IDW contest thing was over, my exams were over and I was thinking "Hmmz." I went out and searched far and beyond to find a store that had some proper inking pens. And I found 'm!

So then... It was time to experiment. And that's when I decided to work out my GeeTwo Megatron design, which is based on a (snow camo) Russian T-90 Main Battle Tank.

As always, crits are very much welcomed. Especially on the inks since it's the first time with these pens eh.
Hmm... He seems to be slightly agitated... o.o' Might be cause someone just dropped a building on him?
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clicking on the image will make you go to DeviantART =P*
Sami
Apr 27 2008, 08:06 PM
it came out really pretty nice. Although my only bit i'd add on about is all the line weight. It's slightly different, but, i find generally, when people go on about adding all the detail to every aspect of the piece it gets garbled and lost some.
With more use of shadows, and more of a difference between line weight/thickness between the foreground and background, it would go a long way to popping Megatron up a bit, i think.
Since Megs is in the forground, u could make the ship or whatever he's climbing out of darker, more shadows, negative space etc. And then since Megatrons is up front, his cannon could be much more bold and again, vary the level of detail, as generally ur focus point would be on a section, and not all over.
--Todd, not Sami.
( . Y . )
Apr 27 2008, 08:48 PM
Sadly, I can't fully judge it until I see green and purple.