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Smokescreened
I've been working on a story since about November about what my ex did and about the dreams I've been having, it's hit about 36 pages so far. It's called Pain of pain within, it starts off when my ex betrayed me and then moves into this year and what I saw in my dreams and continues through the years with small things happening. Would anyone like to read it? If so, then I can easily send it in full to mail addresses. It's not finished yet, not sure when it will be, I've added more for today and I'll add more when I'm ready to. Anyway, you're all welcome to give it a read if you want to.

-Chuckles
Snapes on a Plane
Sure bet, I'd like to see your writing style.

Show me what you got man, rjallen@att.net

-Turbine
THE STIG
hell im all for it. dsrtek1@yahoo.com. sounds deep n i could learn something from other ppls stories/dreams explanations...observations... its going to take me some time to read it so bare with me if i dont reply lol
Smokescreened
Well it doesn't look at explaining dreams as such, just what the dreams have been showing and are still showing. One day, when my mood is hopefully better, I might write a more complex story about dreams and what they could very well be in reality.

-Chuckles
Smokescreened
To the members who I sent my story to, how was it? I've added a little more if you would like to read it.

-Chuckles
Snapes on a Plane
I don't know if you sent it to me or not, but I never got it icon_wink.gif
JustLOKIPLVY
Cool. I find the who dream/hallucination concept fascinating. It's usually what I like to focus on when writing. Right now I's 80+ pages into an anime fanfic which I expect to have finished sometime soon after the apacolypse. A bit of a break from the darker writing is always good.. Anyway I'm game for it, and enjoy reading anothwer persons style. If you decide to you can send it to z512d1@mts.net.
Smokescreened
That's the story so far sent out, it's pretty adult in terms of language, so I can't submit it on the site, on any site. I'll add more as I dream more.

-Chuckles
JustLOKIPLVY
QUOTE (Smokescreened @ Jan 13 2005, 02:35 PM)
That's the story so far sent out, it's pretty adult in terms of language, so I can't submit it on the site, on any site.  I'll add more as I dream more.

Tony.

No problem. I'm no stranger to adult language in writing. Say it as it is right? optimuslaugh2.gif
Though graphic violence and gore are more of an issue when I write. (Too many John Woo films in such.) rolleyestf.gif I'll get back to you once I've read it. wave.gif
Smokescreened
The story I've been writing is finally finished, it hit 80 pages. Anyone wants to read it, then I'll send it to any e-mail addresses. One down, more to go.

-Chuckles
JustLOKIPLVY
Congrats on finally finishing it Tony, that's more than I've been able to accomplish. Also I've barely had the time to skim over what you sent but I'm trying to get to it in time. Between work, a filled socail schedule on and off the computer and a multitude of writing/building projects underway time is indeed tight. If you want you can send it over and though it may take a while I'll try to comment as I find time to read through it.
z512d1@mts.net

BTW best of luck with you other works.

AL
Smokescreened
Sent. Anyone else want to read it?

-Chuckles
Rapid Run
I'd like to read it Smokescreened, send it to
rapidrunx@yahoo.com
Smokescreened
Story sent, anyone else want to read it?

-Chuckles
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